Subject: Your comments Date: Tuesday, March 30, 2004 7:54 PM From: Peter G. Neumann To: Cc: Douglas W Jones , , Rebecca, The three-way efforts of Doug, Drew, and me have addressed almost all of your comments (we have not yet gone through Sections 9 and 10, which will be done by Drew and Doug this evening -- Doug has just split for Iowa dinnertime). I think your comments are extremely valuable and have stimulated some good discussions among us. In almost all cases, I think we did something constructive in response to those comments and considerably improve the proposal. Drew has marked up your comments with notes, and will install a few more agreed-upon fixes that we sketched out but did not include yet in the live version. If you have further comments tonight, Drew and Doug should be hard at work, so address any residual comments to them, cc: me as well. (However, I must split in a few minutes.) I think all of your Notable pieces are now in place. I hope Donna and Alicia don't discover any further glitches tomorrow. Many thanks for your extreme diligence under great duress. Your expertise has been enormously valuable to the proposal process. P